G1 1947 ग़ज़ल Ghazal पास आकर जो मना लेते तो अच्छा था (paas aakar jo mana lete to achchha tha .)It would have been nice if you could convince me by coming near me.

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Radeef : to accha tha रदीफ़ लेते तो अच्छा था

 नजर अपनी जो मिलने से, बचा लेते तो अच्छा था ।

खुशी कुछ और दिन हम भी, मना लेते तो अच्छा था ।

उछाले तोहमतों के रंग जो इस दुनिया ने हम पर हैं ।

जो दामन दाग से अपना, बचा लेते तो अच्छा था ।

मैं बच जाता तेरी नज़रों के तीरों से मेरे हमदम ।

मुझे तुम देख कर नज़रें चुरा लेते तो अच्छा था ।

बुरी किस्मत ये मेरी है, जला जो आशियाना ये।

कहीं तुम और अपना घर सजा लेते तो अच्छा था ।

मिली तेरी मेरी नजरें ,हुआ जबसे सामना अपना।

नजर मिलते हीजो नजरें, झुका लेते तो अच्छा था ।

चलो होना था वो सब हो गया अब तो मैं रुठा हूं ।

मुझे तुम पास आकर जो मना लेते तो अच्छा था ।

बनी अपनी न ये दुनिया हमारे प्यार में हमदम ।

इसी दुनिया से जो हमदम ,दुआ लेते तो अच्छा था।

12.42pm 11March 2022

Najar apanee jo milane se, bacha lete to achchha tha .

Khushee kuchh aur din ham bhee, mana lete to achchha tha .

Uchhaale tohamaton ke rang jo is duniya ne ham par hain .

Jo daaman daag se apana, bacha lete to achchha tha .

Main bach jaata teree nazaron ke teeron se mere hamadam .

Mujhe tum dekh kar nazaren chura lete to achchha tha .

Buree kismat ye meree hai, jala jo aashiyaana ye.

Kaheen tum aur apana ghar saja lete to achchha tha .

Milee teree meree najaren ,hua tha saamana apana.

Nazar milate jo tum najaren jhuka lete to achchha tha .

Chalo hona tha vo sab ho gaya ab to main rutha hoon .

Mujhe tum paas aakar jo mana lete to achchha tha .

Bani apanee na ye duniya hamaare pyaar mein hamadam .

Isi duniya se jo hamadam ,dua lete to achchha tha.

(English meaning)

It would have been better if you could have saved your eyes from meeting.

It would have been nice if we could have celebrated a few more days happily.

Toss the colors of the gifts that this world has bestowed upon us.

It would have been better if we could have saved himself from the scar.

I would have been saved by the arrows of your eyes.

It would have been nice if you could steal your eyes after seeing me.

The bad luck is mine, this is my home.

It would have been nice if you could have decorated your house somewhere.

My eyes met you, I had to face my own.

It would have been nice if you could have bowed your eyes.

Let it happen, all that has happened, now I am angry.

It would have been nice if you could convince me by coming near me.

This world has not become our own, we are in love with each other

It would have been good if we had received prayers from this world.